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'Stacio
Mara'
By Peter Devonald and Luke Losey |
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VOTED NUMBER ONE ON FRANCIS FORD COPPOLA'S AMERICAN ZOETROPE SHORT FILM WEBSITE
ALL REVIEWS FROM ZOETROPE You've woven a suspenseful tale. I really enjoy your tone and your amazing visuals. You've built an intriguing mystery (C.P) A cool gothic work, excellent descriptive writing, clandestine story, and looping the writing did an excellent job of arriving to a conclusion. (N.A.S) Verrrrry cool... It seemed like a noir sort of film... Well written, intriguing characters. Like to know more about them. There isn't anything that I would change about it. It has hung around with me since I read it. That's a VERY good thing. (B.S.S.) Stacio Mara is a most excellent piece of screen writing, extremely visual, beautifully paced and finely crafted. Wonderful descriptions. Great attention to detail. Nice images of the fish, the fruit and the seafood, staring people and a very nervous Traveler. Excellent. Great piece of writing. (M.G) One of the most visually arresting and interesting scripts I've ever read. Beautiful, to-die-for visuals. (J.S.I) This is a highly imaginative, focused, and impressive piece of work. Congratulations. The images are strong, effective, and canny. It's a GREAT project. (M.B)
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