The Guilty Few

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'The Guilty Few'

By Peter Devonald

Good opening. Quick and to the point, with a little mystery built in. The story is very good. Overall the story, and plot twists are great. This is a good screenplay. (M.S.)

The story line was good. Interesting topic. I did want to find out the ending. Good. (S.K.)

Wow, good going. That was a fast paced tale if I ever read one. I really have no recommendations for you, because I thought it was stupendous. Obviously, you have had some serious experience in this field. Crime-thriller genre specifically. (P.R.)

I like the hard-boiled opening. The plait of hair is a good detail... I'm intrigued by it and I'm interested in finding what's happening... This seems to me to be written at a professional level. (D.T.)

Great opening, full of intrigue and images. Great sense of visuals throughout. Very good characters, all believable and well rounded. Sharp dialogue, great images deals with some harsh subjects in an adult and unusual way. (D.C.)

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