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EXTRACT FROM 'DAWN AND THE FROG'
by Peter Devonald and Kevin Scrantz
COPYRIGHT 2004-2009: Contact pdevonald@hotmail.com for more details

               FADE IN:

               COLD OPEN:

                                   STU (V.O.)
                         So a bird and a snake were born at
                         the same time.  

                                   JESSIE (V.O.)
                         Yeah?



               EXT.  LONDON - SUBURB - DAY

               Gray terrace houses against a bleak gray sky.

                                   STU (O.S.)
                         But they were shunned by their
                         fellow species because they were
                         both blind.  

                                   JESSIE (O.S.)
                         'Kay...

               Outside the CHEADLE HOUSE, a CAT washes its face by a stunted
               rosebush in a clay pot.

                                   DAWN (O.S.)
                         Would you hurry it up, please?  I'm
                         gonna be late.

               A squealing noise O.S.  Cat looks up as a clothesline inches
               towards the window.

                                   STU (O.S.)
                         They met up one day and decided
                         since no one from their species
                         paid any attention to them, they'd
                         get to know each other.  

               A brassiere made from clamshells and green panties painted
               with fake fish scales flap by.  DAWN's hands reach out of the
               window and snatch them off the line.



               INT.  CHEADLE HOUSE - DAWN'S BEDROOM

               STING smiles from a wall poster.

                                   STU (O.S.)
                         Since they were blind, they thought
                         the best way to do that was to
                         touch each other.  

               Jessie snorts loudly O.S.  DAWN, early 20's, dyed red hair,
               frowns while she adjusts her clamshells bra and struggles
               into a TIGHT skirt matching the fish scale panties.  

                                   STU (O.S.)
                         The snake went first, and after
                         touching the bird all over, says:
                         "You have feathers, a beak, and
                         wings, so you must be a bird." 



               HALLWAY

               Through the open bathroom door, plump JESSIE, late 20's,
               fixes her blonde hair at the mirror.  STU CHEADLE, 20's, long
               haired and lanky, lounges on the toilet with a newspaper.  

                                   STU
                         Next was the bird's turn.  So it
                         touches the snake all over. 
                         "Hmmm," it says.  "Slimy skin,
                         scales, no balls.  You must be
                         French."

               Jessie bellows hysterical laughter.  Dawn BANGS the wall.

                                   DAWN
                         Oh, come on!

                                   STU
                         Oi!

                                   JESSIE
                         If you dent the wall, I dent your
                         head.

               Jessie and Stu look at each other.  He folds the newspaper. 
               Both hurry out.  Dawn steps in.

                                   DAWN
                         Thank you.

               Dawn slams the door shut.



               EXT.  PARIS - STREET - DAY 

               A sports car roars through traffic, screeching around hairpin
               curves.  In the front seat, gorgeous BLONDE TWINS.  Between
               them, a wine bottle in one hand, cigarette in the other, LUC
               PRALINE.

               In his 20's, Luc is dark and pretty, a pointless person in an
               expensive designer suit, shirt undone to show his chest.



               EXT.  PRALINE TOWNHOUSE - COURTYARD 

               Stinking of ambience and tradition.  

               SYLVIE glares from the door as the sports car pulls in.  In
               her 20's, beautiful, with dark bobbed hair and an amazing
               figure, she is acidic Parisian elegance at its best.  

               Luc stumbles out of the car.  BLONDE TWO waves at Sylvie.  

                                   BLONDE TWO
                         Here he is, safe and sound.

               Sylvie backs inside the house, SLAMS the front door.  

               Luc kisses Blonde One.

                                   LUC
                         Marie-Clare, thank you for a lovely
                         evening.

               Blonde Two lights a cigarette.

                                   LUC
                         Marie-Marie, leaving you is like
                         dying a thousand deaths.

               He kisses her as she exhales.  He backs off, coughing smoke.  



               INT.  PRALINE HOUSE - DINING ROOM 

               Sylvie butters a croissant as she reads LE NEWSPAPER.  Luc
               stumbles in and kisses her cheek.

                                   LUC
                         Sylvie.  

               He reaches for the croissant.  Sylvie's hand comes down fast. 
               Luc jerks his hand away as the fork judders into the table.

                                   LUC
                         Ah!  Now, aren't you ashamed of
                         yourself?  And on my grandmother's
                         table.

               He removes the fork, smooths the wood with his hand.  Sylvie
               tosses a letter at him.  

                                   SYLVIE
                         You are overdrawn at the bank. 
                         Again.  Three million euros you
                         owe.  

                                   LUC
                             (shrugs)
                         I am an only child from one of the
                         wealthiest houses of Paris.  All my
                         relatives are old, a crouton away
                         from death.  
                             (strokes her cheek)
                         Plus, I was born lucky.  Something
                         good always happens when I need it
                         most.

               She slaps him.

                                   LUC
                         Oof!  You're not angry about the
                         twins?  They're only friends.  I
                         could never give my heart to them. 
                         What would it take to convince you?

               Sylvie shrugs, looks her bare ring finger, then up at Luc.  

                                   SYLVIE
                         Marry me.

                                   LUC
                         Marry!

               She jumps up, wraps her arms tight around his neck.

                                   SYLVIE
                         It is all I want.

                                   LUC
                         You are joking.  All these years
                         together and now you want to marry
                         me when I am penniless?  

               He chuckles.  She backs away with a hurt look.

                                   SYLVIE
                         It's obvious I'm asking too much. 
                         I apologize.  I'll just...  go
                         on...  Alone.

               She edges to the door, watching him out the corner of one
               eye.  She takes another tentative step away.

                                   SYLVIE
                         I will just...  Go.

               He grabs her wrist, pulls her back.

                                   LUC
                         If it is only marriage you want... 
                         I would consider it the greatest
                         honor of my life.

                                   SYLVIE
                         Luc!

               She hugs him, sobs with happiness.



               EXT.  LONDON - CHAPPY'S CHIPPY - DAY  

               A slick chain eatery.  Rain batters a sign shaped like a
               mermaid holding a sandwich.  



               INT.  CHAPPY'S CHIPPY - LOCKER ROOM

               Dawn opens her locker.  Taped inside the door, a color PHOTO
               of Sting.  Dawn takes two concert tickets from an envelope
               and kisses them.

                                   DAWN
                         Soon, Sting.  Soon.

               Sting's photo WINKS at her.

                                   STING
                         I'll be singing JUST for you, Dawn!

               Dawn beams, closes the locker, revealing BRENDA standing
               behind it.  Brenda, 20's, pouty, attractive in a whore-ish
               way, wears the same clamshell bra and TIGHT skirt as Dawn.

                                   BRENDA
                         Come on, Dawn, be a friend and sell
                         me your other Sting ticket.

                                   DAWN
                         It's my boyfriend's ticket.  Go
                         find your own.

                                   BRENDA
                         I've been trying for days, not even
                         ticket touts have any more.  I've
                         just got to see Sting!

                                   DAWN
                         I thought you were scheduled to
                         work that night?

                                   BRENDA
                         I can get somebody to fill in for
                         me.  If I had a ticket, that is.

                                   DAWN
                         Sorry, Brenda, wish I could help. 
                         You should have waited in line like
                         I did.  Oh hell, it's Granger.

               A shrill whistle blasts O.S.  GRANGER, 30's, short, stout,
               prickly, stands beside a scale with a tape measure.

                                   GRANGER
                         Tank Girls, fall in!

               Dawn and Brenda rush to join TWO GIRLS in identical costume.

                                   GRANGER
                         Dawn Vining.

               Dawn climbs on the scale while Granger measures her waist.

                                   GRANGER
                         You've gained half an inch.  One
                         more and you'll be sent home.

               Brenda snorts.



               INT.  PARIS - PRALINE HOUSE - BEDROOM - DUSK

               Sting croons a romantic ballad through the stereo.  Luc sings
               along in mangled English as he showers O.S.  

               Sylvie lounges with LE BRIDE magazine.  The phone rings.



               BATHROOM

               Luc, still singing, ties a towel around his waist.  



               BEDROOM

               Sylvie puts the phone down with a stricken look as Luc comes
               in.  

                                   SYLVIE
                         Cherie.  I have horrible news.

               She holds his face in her hands, hurting for him.

                                   SYLVIE
                         I am so sorry to be the one to tell
                         you, my dearest.  But your
                         father...  Your father is dead.

               Luc's jaw drops.  He slaps his hands against his eyes. 
               Sylvie's eyes brim with tears.

                                   SYLVIE
                         I know, but it was very quick.  He
                         did not suffer, so the doctors say. 
                         Do not take this too hard, but... 
                         Oh!  How can I tell you this?

               He lowers his hands, looks at her.  

                                   SYLVIE
                         They have already scattered his
                         ashes at sea, as he requested. 
                         There won't even be a funeral.

               Luc's face twitches as he looks up at the ceiling.  Then
               breaks into a high wide gleeful smile.

                                   LUC
                         Yes!

               He howls, whips the towel off.  He hops onto the dresser,
               dances naked.  Sylvie looks at him, horrified.

                                   SYLVIE
                         Luc!  Oh, my poor, poor Luc!  The
                         shock, I should not have told you
                         the way I did.  Now you are
                         hysterical and it is all my fault!  

                                   LUC
                         Hysterical, me?  Noooon.  Bankrupt,
                         me?  Ehn-ehn-ehn, pas moi, pas moi!

               Sylvie crosses herself and staggers back, mortified as Luc
               leaps on the bed, whoops wildly as he runs the towel between
               his legs.  

                                   LUC
                         Party time!  Magnifique!  The 1998
                         World Cup all over again!  I am
                         rich!  Rich beyond my wildest
                         dreams!

                                   SYLVIE
                         Have you lost your mind?  Your
                         father is dead!

               Luc leaps off the bed, grabs her by the arms.  

                                   LUC
                         Yes!  We must celebrate.  Wine! 
                         Didn't I tell you something good
                         always happens when I need it most?

               He kisses her passionately.  Sylvie, surprised, kisses back.  

                                   SYLVIE
                         And, uh, we will still marry?

                                   LUC
                         Oh, oui.  Oui!

                                   SYLVIE
                         Wheeeeeeee!

               They sink to the floor in a frenzy of lust.



               INT.  PARIS - BOUCHON'S OFFICE - DAY

               BOUCHON, 50's, an iceberg in pinstripes, stares across the
               vast desk at Luc, who rubs his palms, trying not to show joy.  

                                   LUC
                         It is a very emotional time for me. 
                         I am devastated by the loss of my
                         beloved papa, as I'm sure you can
                         understand, Monsieur Bouchon.  So,
                         tell me.  How...

                                   BOUCHON
                         How did he die?

                                   LUC
                         How much did he leave me?  

               Bouchon purses his lips, slides an envelope across the desk. 
               Luc opens it.  A videocassette slips out.

                                   LUC
                         He left me a video?  

               Bouchon picks it up, goes to the VCR, puts the tape in.

               On the TV, white-haired, twinkly-eyed, PRALINE, 70, appears.  

                                   PRALINE
                         Well, my son.  We meet again.  Can
                         I just say, it has been a good
                         time, not a long time.  Not a day
                         goes by that I am not thankful we
                         have not been in contact.  

               Luc looks at Bouchon, his jaw dropping.

                                   LUC
                         What is this?

               Bouchon gestures to the TV.

               Beside Praline, seen only from the neck down, a busty NURSE
               holds a glass of champagne and a cigar.

                                   PRALINE
                         But now, I assume from the fact
                         that you are here, I am dead.  So
                         we have the dubious pleasure of
                         being in each other's company
                         again.  And with that thought
                         alone, I need a drink.

               Nurse hands Praline champagne.  He leans back in his chair
               while she lights his cigar.  He grins up at her. 
               As she turns away, his free hand gooses her.  Nurse giggles. 
               Praline remembers the camera, turns to it, frowns.

                                   PRALINE
                         You never in your whole life
                         listened to me.  Until now.  Now
                         you have no choice if you want my
                         money.

               Luc winces.

                                   LUC
                         Merde!
                             (to Bouchon)
                         I'm just so upset that he's gone.

               On a video screen behind Praline, a MONTAGE of fast cars,
               chateau, women, yachts.

                                   PRALINE
                         When I look back over my life, I
                         see happiness and joy.  Why would I
                         not?  I have been blessed with more
                         riches than I could spend in two
                         lifetimes.  And now I am in the
                         happiest of places where I can
                         bestow this lovely legacy.
                             (sips champagne)
                         And then I look at you.  Luc.  Luc,
                         the cretin.  Luc, le croutte!

               Spittle hits the camera lens.  Praline wipes his mouth. 
               Nurse takes a napkin from her cleavage, bends down and wipes
               the lens.  

               Luc leans back, intimidated.

                                   PRALINE (O.S.)
                         Don't think for one second I am not
                         aware of what you are.

               Praline leans forward angrily as the camera pans in on him.

                                   PRALINE
                         A pathetic travesty of a man. 
                         Utterly vacuous, utterly empty. 
                         And you know how I know this, when
                         I have not laid eyes on your
                         pathetic face in years?

               Praline leans back in her chair, an evil smile.

                                   PRALINE
                         I had you followed.

               Praline snaps his fingers.  PHOTOS on the video screen show
               Luc drunk, drunker.  Each shot closer, uglier, more
               distorted.

               Luc groans and covers his face with his hands.

                                   PRALINE
                         So, what are we to do?  All my
                         life, my work, has been for
                         nothing.

               Praline shakes his head, breathes harshly.  The Nurse gives
               him oxygen.  Praline eyes her up and down with a smile.

                                   PRALINE
                         Okay, maybe not nothing, but if I
                         wasn't already dead, it would kill
                         me to think of you living off my
                         sweat.  And so, I have set up a
                         certain condition you must adhere
                         to if you want money.  Only when
                         you do this thing will you be given
                         my fortune.

               Praline leers.  Looks horrified.  Grips his chest with a
               pained look.  Collapses back in his chair.  The screen goes
               blue.

               Luc looks at the TV, worried.

                                   LUC
                         He died making the will?

                                   BOUCHON
                         It appears so.

                                   LUC
                         But I don't even know what the task
                         is, how can I complete it?
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