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EXTRACT FROM 'SOLSTICE'
by Peter Devonald and Kevin Scrantz
COPYRIGHT 2004-2009: Contact pdevonald@hotmail.com for more details

               FADE IN:



               EXT.  PILL HOUSE - GARDEN - DAY

               A carousel clothesline hung with large ladies' garments
               squeals rustily as it turns.



               TITLE:  "SOLSTICE"



               GORDON'S HANDS

               Use a wrench to tighten a pipe fitting.



               GORDON 

               A small, fastidious man of 30, reaches over, flicks a
               switch.  

               A concealed pump HUMS.  A squatting stone TOAD belches,
               then spits a stream of water into a large stone clamshell.

               Gordon smiles proudly.  O.S., feminine laughter.  He looks
               up.  Across the low garden wall - 



               RACHEL TRELLIS

               Cradles a cell phone to her ear while she waters roses.
               Rachel is in her 20's, blonde, with an old-fashioned
               prettiness.  She notices Gordon and smiles his way.  



               GORDON

               Smiles back, bashful. 

                                   DAPHNE (O.S.)
                         Gordon! 



               DAPHNE PILL

               A glowering behemoth of 30-something with a prominent mole
               on her upper lip, clutches a basket of laundry.  

                                   DAPHNE
                         Stop harassing that woman, what's
                         the matter with you?

               She notices the toad and steps back, walks around it.

                                   DAPHNE
                         That is the most repulsive thing
                         I've ever seen. 

                                   GORDON
                         It's a water feature.

                                   DAPHNE
                         Very you.  Gordon.
                             (steps Closer)
                         Gordon, did you take my good pink
                         knickers from the clothesline?

                                   GORDON
                         Your pink - no!  Of course not.

                                   DAPHNE
                         Then they must have been stolen. 

                                   GORDON
                         Now, Daphne, who in their right
                         mind - I mean, who would steal
                         knickers?

               Daphne, miffed, pulls her shirt closed over her cleavage.

                                   DAPHNE
                         Some pervert, that's who. Oh, I
                         see the way men look at me when I
                         walk down the street.  Undressing
                         me with their eyes... I'd better
                         call the police.  

               Daphne looks at the toad, then Gordon, harrumphs and stalks
               back to the house.  



               GARDEN - LATER

               Gordon weeds his roses.  Behind him Daphne gives her
               statement at the clothesline to plainclothes DETECTIVE
               HARDIN, arms waving.  

               Hardin, 40, watery-eyed, big for nothing, approaches
               Gordon.   

                                   HARDIN (O.S.)
                         Mister Pill? 

               Gordon turns to Hardin's extended hand, wipes his dirty
               hand on his trousers and shakes it.

                                   HARDIN
                         Detective Hardin.  I just want
                         you to know, I'm on this case
                         personally, and will not rest
                         until your wife's property is
                         returned safely.

                                   GORDON
                         Well, um, thank you.  We'll all
                         sleep easier knowing that.

                                   HARDIN
                         Bloody shame, that happening to a
                         lady as nice as your wife.  It's
                         obvious why they were stolen, of
                         course. 

                                   GORDON
                         Is it?

                                   HARDIN
                         Certainly. She's a very fetching
                         little lady, if you don't mind my
                         saying so.

               Hardin and Gordon watch brawny Daphne beat the hell out of
               a rug slung over the clothesline.  



               INT.  PILL HOUSE - KITCHEN - NIGHT

               Gordon and Daphne eat dinner in silence, the only sound
               their utensils on china and Daphne's chewing.

               Gordon looks down at the newspaper:  "CLORLEYS OPEN
               HISTORIC GARDENS TO PUBLIC FOR FIRST TIME."  He smiles,
               carefully tears it out.

                                   DAPHNE
                         What's that?

                                   GORDON
                         Nothing.

                                   DAPHNE
                         Don't say "nothing" when it's
                         clearly "something".  It's not
                         about my assault, is it? 

                                   GORDON
                         You weren't assaulted, Daphne. 
                         And, no, it isn't.  

               Daphne rips the paper from his hands.

                                   DAPHNE
                         Gardens?  Again with the gardens!  

                                   GORDON
                         It's the chance of a lifetime! 
                         I've wanted to see the standing
                         stones in Clorley gardens since I
                         was a boy, and it's only open one
                         day, for the summer solstice...

                                   DAPHNE
                         One day?  How do they expect to
                         make any money that way?

                                   GORDON
                         You can only see the sun shining
                         between the stones that one day. 

                                   DAPHNE
                             (tosses clipping at him)
                         I was violated today, and you're
                         mooning over moldy old rocks? I'm
                         so glad to see your priorities
                         are in order. 

               Daphne rises noisily, collects her dishes.

                                   DAPHNE
                         Dry and save after you wash, I
                         don't like my silverware lying
                         out all night.



               LIVING ROOM

               Gordon, apron tied around his waist, puts a thick old
               record of "LA BOHEME" on a phonograph.  

               MUSIC.  RODOLFO sings "O SOAVE FANCIULLA."



               BATHROOM

               Daphne, lolling in bubble bath, frowns at the music.



               GORDON

               Looks out the open window.  Next door, 



               RACHEL

               Sits on a bench in her garden.  Lit by the full moon, she
               glows with beauty, enjoying the music.



               GORDON

               Stares.  Overcome by the music and Rachel, his eyes tear
               up, his chin trembles.



               RACHEL

               Turns her head.  Gordon appears behind her, singing
               Rodolfo's part.  Rachel stands and SINGS back MIMI'S part.

               Gordon takes her hands.  They sing at each other as he
               twirls her around her garden, yearning to kiss, unable to.
               Overhead,



               THE FULL MOON

               Colossal, with a beaming FACE hovers.

                                   DAPHNE (O.S.)
                         Gordon!

               The Moon's FACE looks panicked as it deflates with a
               sputtering noise, spins, spirals away into space.



               GORDON

               Shakes his head.  Daphne towers over him in a bathrobe.

                                   DAPHNE
                         Have some consideration and turn
                         off that racket, I need my rest.  

               Gordon mutes the volume.

                                   DAPHNE
                         I have an appointment with a
                         police sketch artist in the
                         morning.  

               Daphne marches out.  Gordon looks into the distance, sighs.



               EXT.  CLORLEY GARDENS - DAY

               Gordon and Daphne wait outside a locked, chained gate set
               in a tall, mossy wall.

                                   DAPHNE
                         Are you sure you have the right
                         date?

                                   GORDON
                         Of course. Today's the solstice.
                         I can't understand why more
                         people aren't here.

                                   DAPHNE
                         When are they going to open the
                         gate?  It's criminal making
                         people wait like this.

                                   GORDON
                         I wish you'd stayed home.  I
                         really don't think you'll like
                         this.

                                   DAPHNE
                         Stay home?  With a knicker
                         napping maniac on the loose?

               A gray-haired GUARD in an oversized uniform, approaches
               with a big key ring and unlocks the gate.

                                   DAPHNE
                         Well, it's about time.  

                                   GORDON
                         Daphne, shhh.

                                   DAPHNE
                         Don't shush me, Gordon Pill.

               Gordon looks away, embarrassed.  His face lights up as 
               Rachel approaches.  

                                   GORDON
                         Why, hello!

                                   RACHEL
                         Hello, yourself.  You're the
                         Pills, yeah?

               Daphne looks her up and down, sniffs.

                                   GORDON
                         Gordon.  And my Daphne, Wife - uh
                         - wife, Daphne.

                                   RACHEL
                         I'm Rachel Trellis.



               GARDENS

               Brick paths appear and disappear in dense foliage.  Gordon
               and Rachel creep along, fascinated at every turn.  Daphne
               follows, bored, arms crossed as she tramples hapless
               flowers.  

                                   DAPHNE
                         I wasn't bothered about coming,
                         but after the nightmare I've been
                         through, Gordon insisted. 

                                   GORDON
                         My wife lost an article of
                         clothing yesterday.

                                   DAPHNE
                         Lost?  It was stolen, right from
                         under my nose, practically, my
                         best knickers. 
                         Who knows where they are now, or
                         what they're up to?  It makes my
                         blood run cold!

                                   RACHEL
                         I'm so sorry.

                                   DAPHNE
                         Just keep your doors and windows
                         locked, and mind your
                         clothesline, that's all I say.

               Gordon gasps.

                                   DAPHNE
                         What is it?  Did a snake bite
                         you?
                             (to Rachel)
                         I'm allergic to snakes, you know.

                                   GORDON
                         It's this lily, I've never see
                         one this color.

                                   DAPHNE
                         Drab and plain, you would like
                         that.

                                   RACHEL
                         Butterscotch. I have some in my
                         garden. You must both come over
                         sometime, I'll give you a bulb.

                                   GORDON
                         How nice of you! Did you hear
                         that, Daphne?

                                   DAPHNE
                         I heard, Gordon, I'm standing
                         right here.  Thanks awfully,
                         Missus Crumb, but I'm what you
                         might call, Anti-dirt.  I spend
                         most of my time trying to keep it
                         out of my house and off my hands.



               DAPHNE

               Stomps ahead of Gordon and Rachel.  Off to one side,
               ancient willow trees.  Daphne squints, then parts the
               branches like curtains.  

                                   DAPHNE
                         Come and see what I found!

               Gordon and Rachel hurry over. Daphne proudly shows them a
               warped plank gate in the stone wall.  

                                   GORDON
                         What is it?

                                   DAPHNE
                         A gate, you ignoramus.  I'm going
                         to see what's on the other side.

                                   GORDON
                         Do you think you ought to?  It's
                         obviously closed for a reason.

                                   RACHEL
                         Your husband's right, Missus
                         Pill.  It might be trespassing.

                                   DAPHNE
                         I paid good money, I'll bloody
                         well see what's on the other
                         side, thank you.

               Daphne pushes her shoulder against it, grunts. The gate
               scrapes the ground as it cracks open. She squeezes through.
               The gate shuts easily behind her.  

                                   GORDON
                         Daphne is a bit headstrong.

                                   RACHEL
                         I noticed.  Oh, look!   



               THE SETTING SUN

               Slips between rough-hewn standing stones, an orange light
               shaft spreading through the circle.



               GORDON AND RACHEL

               Stare in awe, bathed in orange light.

                                   RACHEL
                         So we're the first people in
                         dozens of years allowed to
                         witness this. Why is that?

                                   GORDON
                         The Clorleys are an odd lot. 
                         Then there's the awful reputation
                         this place has.  

                                   RACHEL
                         Oh, do tell!

                                   GORDON
                         It's somewhat sinister.

                                   RACHEL
                         I don't mind a bit of gore -

                                   GORDON
                         Well, the ancient Druids are
                         supposed to have sacrificed
                         humans here. Then, too, visitors
                         have disappeared on occasion.
                         Rare, but it's happened.

               Rachel hugs herself and steps closer to Gordon.

                                   RACHEL
                         Still beautiful, though, isn't
                         it?



               CLORLEY GARDENS - MAIN GATE

               Rachel comes out.  Gordon follows, looks at his watch.

                                   RACHEL
                         Perhaps she went on home? Let me
                         give you a ride.

                                   GORDON
                         No, thank you, I'd better take
                         another look. If I leave her
                         behind I'll never hear the end of
                         it.

                                   RACHEL
                         Thank you for a delightful
                         afternoon, then. And give my best
                         to Missus Pill.  

                                   GORDON
                         I will - and thank you.

                                   RACHEL
                         Don't forget to come by for your
                         bulbs.

                                   GORDON
                         I won't.

               Gordon watches her go, nearly beside himself with
               happiness.  He turns back to the gate, grim.



               WILLOW TREES

               Gordon looks around.

                                   GORDON
                         Daphne? Daphne?

               Gordon sees the willows, hesitates, then steps through the
               branches to the gate.  

               He grasps the rusty door pull, shoves weakly, only able to
               open a crack wide enough to see through.  

               Shadows from the stone circle stretch across a meadow to a
               black bog. 

               Beside the bog cheering, chanting DRUIDS in coarse clothes
               and animal skins adorned with summer flowers form a merry
               ring around a spreading oak.   

                                   DAPHNE (O.S.)
                         Stop it right now, all of you,
                         this isn't funny anymore!

               Gordon squints at the oak tree.  Daphne, tied to its trunk,
               is being pelted with flowers.

               Gordon whips off his glasses, wipes them, replaces them and
               stares in shock.

               Daphne looks directly at Gordon and SHRIEKS.

                                   DAPHNE
                         Gordon!  Gordon, make them stop
                         it!

               Druids stop dancing and look Gordon's way.

               The Druids race toward Gordon, blocking his view of Daphne.  

                                   DAPHNE (O.S.)
                         Gordon!  Don't leave me with
                         these rude people!  Gordon!



               GORDON

               Jerks the gate shut as the Druids approach.  They pound on
               the other side.
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