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'HANDSOME AND PETAL' By Peter Devonald |
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TOP SCRIPT ON ZOETROPE FOR APRIL (ANNOUNCED JUNE) QUOTES
FROM THE REVIEWS ON ZOETROPE A VERY enjoyable read. TOP marks for originality, cinematic quality and quality of writing. I particularly enjoyed the transitions. My highest praise: I wish I'd written it. (D.K) An elegant, visual script. It is so intelligent and thoughtful... I loved your imagery. The visuals are so rich. I was carried along with the story. (J.D) All the storybook/fairy tale stuff was excellent and I liked a lot of the descriptions. Very cool script. (T.H.) You got into the character nicely, and the back and forth between external and internal reality is nicely played out. Technically you have a nice light touch. A very nice job and I think worthy of production. (R.M.O) 'Handsome and Petal is one of your finest works you've produced and I am so pleased to have read it. You've done a tremendous job melding realism with surrealism. The work flows with a beauty and expressiveness I've rarely found in screenplays. The imagery and symbolism are poignant, visceral thanks to your expressive and creative take on archetypes within the frame work of Fairy Tales. This work soars. (M.G) This is a fascinating reworking of the familiar fairy tale. It was a wonderful moment when Handsome recognized his own face. I loved the introduction of the famous dialogue from the story everyone remembers. Petal's next dialogue was a wonderful shock Loved the image of the money on the bed. Powerful. (L.D) A lovely title. Handsome's actions from fantasy to reality is nicely accomplished. I can see his every move. I easily follow him from forest to psychiatric ward and back. and the end? oh dear yes. The fairy tales have been polluted. (BBS) Overall I enjoyed it, bringing such a simple fairy tale into the world of psychosis might very well complete the circle. (R.S.) Brilliant. There are lots of symbols: There's the wolf's head, which is found on Handsome's ring (black onyx), Petal's cape (gold painted), and the old man's ring (black onyx), the same ring as Handsome's for they're the same people. There's the rabbit, which has been killed by the woodcutter. Unlike Handsome, this rabbit didn't run fast or far enough. There's the palace with its heaven's gates and its many locked doors with only one open--symbolic that there's only one way: conformity. I love your script. It's wonderful, powerful, brilliant. (L.W.) This script will be produced in 2003 through: www.worldpowerstudio.com
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